ALPHABET SOUP// Eves Typeface Progress Part 2

During a Crit focusing on this project we discussed how my typeface may be to masculine and bold to describe Eves personality. However Eve and Myself both agree that the typeface should not be feminine so I tried to go for a more neutral look. I also coloured a white copy of the original font and placed it on top of the bold black. This was to represent Eves usually reserved and quite nature (white front) and its contrast to the bold attitude she can have at times (bold back hiding behind). I still feel that this edition of he typeface can have more work done on it, I have smoothed out some of the sharp edges to tone down a harsh look. Now i plan to apply more personality traits to the typeface so it can be altered further, and hopefully improved.